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Slow and steady wins the writing race

Thu Oct 22, 2009, 11:14 AM
also known as writers block sucks LOL

so hi everyone, hope your all well and safe. Im working on my stories and hope to have a few chapters ready before too long. Its been a little rough lately a few distractions here and there but im rolling best i can.

So for the patience youve all shown me a preview of the up coming chapters for In your heart, and a possible out line for Code Sharingan

Code Sharingan

Chapter 5: fight and flight

Shikamru snapped around at the soudn fo his name being shouted by Choji. His eyes widened as the Black vested Anbu swooped down on him like a hawk, razor keen sword in hand ready to cut him down. he knew he couldnt dodge since if he did hed lose control over the other two he held and then he and his friends would be in a world of hurt. instead he closed hsi eyes and waited for the telling blow.

A blow which never came.

As he looked up he saw a stare of abject horror coming from the anbus mask slots. A stare which was amplified as he began to make his way over to the two ensared by his jutsu.

Shina what are you doing one cried out in horror as the blade was raised over his head.

I cant stop myself,My bodies moving on its own!! he shouted back as the sword came down and decaptitated his teamate. Shikamaru quickly released the kagemane on both of them as the second one was cut down by his seemingly possesed comerade.

the possessed anbu suddenly shuddered as if his body had come back to himself, he turned to shikamaru and snarled but whatever threat he was about to utter was cut off as Ino's black gloved fist collided with his head with enoguh force to shatter his mask and send him hurlting dead as a doornail over a hundred yards away to crash into a tree with enough force to split the trunk down the middle.

Shikamaru smirked as she turned to him with that familiar Ino grin on her face. "Been working on your Shintensin I see." he quipped before continuing "thanks Ino."

her grin only grew wider if that was at all possible seeming to shien like the sun and she seemed to glow with his praise, and in that instance he stared agape it was as if the sun shown only on her.

In your heart

Chapter 4: Best Man

“I’m worried Ino.” He spoke slowly as if feeling out the words “I’m worried about this wedding.”

“The wedding!?” Ino’s shock was evident “What’s got you worried? Is it Sakura?” This time her shock was replaced with anger, and the hint of a challenging edge to her voice.

“No I’m not worried about Sakura…” he began only to have Ino snort her whispered “Not like you ever were.” Not going unheard. Ino noticed Sasuke flinch and go ashen momentarily as she winced before apologizing.

“Sorry Sasuke-kun that was a low blow.” Ino felt chagrined as she knew how close the three members of Team seven were and what they had gone through to become that close.

Sasuke merely shrugged it off it wasn't the first time and it wouldn't be the last he'd get such abuse, but he'd endure it as long as he lived rather then allow such a betrayal to happen again.

"Don't worry about it." he shook it off before turning and looking right at her onyx eyes locked with cerulean blue as if he were deciding wether he could trust her with this. She bore up under the scrutiny and he nodded his head in acknowledgement before speaking again. What he said though threw her completley for a loop.

"I'm worried about Naruto."

In your heart

Chapter 5: Cold hands, Warm heart

he watched her move as she prepared herself. This was what drew him towards her. It was the little things, the simple things about her.

the ways she subconsciously adjusted her glasses even though they always sat perfectly on her cute little peak of a nose. the way she would run her fingers through the messy side of her lower back length red hair causing it to become messier then it already was. The way she adjusted her kunai and shuriken pouch untill it sat just so on her hip within easy reach but not in the way.

It was always the simple things that drew them together. They enjoyed many of the same things, their coffee black and strong, their tea warm and slightly bitter, their food bland but nutricious, they even enjoyed the same spice.

She felt his eyes on her and cocked her head sideways as her crimson eyes studied him quizzically. "beautiful..." he thought.

her cheeks burned a little red and he wondered if she'd read his thoughts--she was an exceptional reader of people eve without a Byakugan-- but then realized that no she was simply blushing under his scrutiny.

"What?" she snapped at him. Yes he smiled more, she was never afraid to speak her mind even if it would upset him. He smiled warmly because he knew that no matter what she'd always tell him where he stood, and where he screwed up. even if she had to beat it into his skull.

"Your lips." he said simply indicating the thin and soft pink flesh around her frowning mouth which was highlighted with a soft red gloss. "You've got some thing on them."

She reached up her fingers and checked, while looking into the mirror. "What is it?" she asked "I dont see anything..." she continued before gasping as he suddenly stood in front of her, and suddenly his lips closed with hers molding with her lips as if they were clay warmed by the passion they shared and shaped by their hearts.

"S-Sasuke..." she gasped out agaisnt his lips.

His hands slid up gently to cup her head and his fingers slid through her hair which woudl have been brassy on anyone else but on her was a bold statement of identity along with her glasses. He didnt respond except to deepen the kiss allowing his tongue to slip into her open and inviting mouth. He explored for a second before his lips left her as he sucked soflty on her lower lip then pulled back. She moaned softly before visibly shuddering and bringing her self back into control.

This, yes this was what he loved about her. The way she said his name, the way she spoke softly to him when no one was around, but got loud and brazen when in the company of others.

the simple things. the things that made her who she was. The woman he'd fallen in love with.


thats all I got for now, jsut a small preview of whats up coming with the stories and I hope to release the chapters soon.

take care all thanks and I hope you enjoy them.

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:iconnarutofan12736:
hey im sorry for bugging you again its just the naruhina fans are bothering me they keep saying sakura loves sasuke and crap and then they naruto is going to be with hinata just because she confessed and crap could you help me out idk how much more drama i can take.
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when dont they say that. theyve been spewing the same crap since the manga began. I fall back on the manga itself which supports quite a different outcome.

Why would Naruto be with hinata just because she confessed? if that were the case Sakura would be with Lee because he confessed, Sakura would be with sasuke because he confessed, Ino would be with Sasuke because she confessed. I mean seriously confession doesnt mean an automatic guaranteed relationship.

Dont worry about the drama, sit bakc and enjoy the story being told.

there are still Zutarrans out there crying in their cheerios because Kataang happend for goodness sakes.

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:iconnarutofan12736:
yea i know its just one sasusaku fan said like in chapter 469 and 470 that person said where is narusaku? its dead and now sakura is going after sasuke and then she will confess her love to him and then that person naruto is going to remember hinata's confession and they will be together,but then i ask myself how can they be together if what sakura felt towards sasuke was a crush? or how can hinata be with naruto if loves him out of admiration? and what about sasuke he doesn't even like sakura at all really! and the same with naruto he doesn't like hinata like that just as a friend what do you think?
:iconcatsi563:
I think Narutos going to be with Sakura.

I think I have manga evidence to support it, and dont have to fall back on tired shallow arguments to sight for it.

I think Id like an apple cinnamon jelly filled donut right now

mmmmmmmm donut :drool:

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:iconnarutofan12736:
yea i agree with you its obvious narusaku is going to happen! and yea that sounds good right now *drools*
:iconnarutofan12736:
hey im sorry if i talk to you to much,but i know naruto and sakura love each other but the naruhina fans are calling sakura a bitch and saying she was trying to brainwash naruto and then they said naruto doesn't love sakura and stuff and then sasusaku fans say sakura is going to join sasuke WTH! could you help me.
:iconcatsi563:
its no problem im always glad to discuss such things.

when havent NaruHina fans called Sakura a bitch? Ive heard ino and Karin be called the same from SasuSaku fans as well its nothing new. and entirely baseless.

hell quite a few people in avatar were calling Katara a bitch because she was interfereing with Aang and Mang.

theyve also accused Sakura of everything from trying to manipulate both Sasuke and Naruto for some nefarious scheme or another. its patently ridiculous, and again baseless arguments not supported by facts.

as to naruto not loving Sakura

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

yeah that explains why he made a promise to bring back her crush, and nearly died to keep that promise twice. he must absolutely loathe her *end sarcasm*

as to sakura joining sasuke well thats not going to happen save Sakura joining her fist to sasukes skull. thats about as far as Sakura joining sasuke would go.

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:iconnarutofan12736:
thanks man i needed that people are really stupid i mean sakura would never betray naruto and she loves him! but the naruhina fans are starting bulllcrap saying their was alot of naruhina moments *sighs* and then sasusaku fans say if sakura didn't love sasuke then why did she say it *sighs* kishimoto even stated in the third naruto data book that sakura thought what she felt towards sasuke was love when it wasn't what do you think?
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because they fail to look underneath the underneath. they fail to recall the bench scene wasnt Sakura and Sasuke it was Sakura and Naruto.

in essence she fell in love with an illusion of Sasuke that was wrapped around naruto.

logically she fell in love with naruto because she thought he was sasuke.

also Kishimoto said she felt towards Sasuke was ""what she thought"" was love.

what she thought she felt. not what she felt. but what she thought.

a big difference. and one thats going to come into play soon when Sasuke and Sakura confront each other.

also they fail to take into account the bond between Karin and Sasuke. a strong bond that has been very much at the forefront of the two characters since Karins introduction.

as to naruhina well there have been a grand total of 2 moments of interaction between them, the cofnession and the talk before he fought neji. thats it nothing more.

the only moments of development end there. compared to narusaku who have multiple moments of strong development and clear forward movement in the relationship.

so really whos spouting crap out the wrong hole?

aint us NaruSaku fans thats for sure

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:iconnarutofan12736:
yea thats all the truth i think when sakura confronts sasuke she is finally going to learn the truth about that time on the bench and as for naruhina it wasn't real love naruto has always liked her as just as a friend and she knows that.

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