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In your eyes Chap 12 Epilogue by ~catsi563:iconcatsi563:



                                                In your eyes

                                              A NaruSaku Story

                                                    Epilogue

Sakura walked down the street towards her home. She’d had a long day at the hospital as the head of Konoha’s medical department. Most of it thankfully was paperwork, though she did have the pleasure of congratulating Ino on discovering she was pregnant with her and Choji’s sixth child. Sakura shook her head the two of them had proven to be the most prolific of the rookie 9 and team Guy in the child bearing department. Ino had crowed at the birth of their fourth child as she’d proudly proclaimed that she had finally beaten Sakura. Sakura of course was forced to remind her what a sixth child would do to her –admittedly still great—figure causing Ino to break down into tears.

“Sakura-San!” someone called her.

She turned to see a flash of red hair as Karin approached her with a smile.

“Karin-San how are you?” she asked returning the Kunoichi’s smile with one of her own.

She had yet to admit it but the red head had rapidly become indispensable to her in the hospital taking a serious load of work off her shoulders.

“Good thanks. I wanted to thank you for your help. I think Sasuke-Kun may propose tonight at dinner.” The redhead smiled and Sakura joined in.

“Karin that’s great, and about time too I was beginning to think he’d take forever brooding about it.” Sakura sighed shaking her head.

Karin shook her head but smiled none the less. “So you’re heading home?”

Sakura nodded. “Yes I’m Starving and Naruto always has dinner ready for me when I get home.” She smiled back and her stomach rumbled in agreement. Her husband’s cooking while already skilled had improved dramatically.

“I don’t know how the two of you find the time, three kids, chief of the medical department, and the Hokage on top of it all.” Karin smiled with a look of wonder on her face.

“Kage-Bushin really comes in handy with paper work.” Sakura smiled with a wink.

Karin smiled back and both women shared a good laugh before parting ways. They’d become fast friends over the years and she cherished their friendship almost as much as she cherished her friendship with Ino. Only the mysterious Rin who’d finally managed to nail down the Copy Ninja Kakashi was closer to her.

She sighed romantically as she walked through the streets. Everywhere she looked signs of love were in the air. As she passed the Hyuuga compound she heard the yipping of puppies as Hinata and Kiba fed the pups they were breeding in the kennels. The twins would be introduced to their pups soon.

As she passed the Akimichi compound she could hear the boisterous laughter of a large family in both size and number. Ino’s dulcet tones caused her to laugh out loud as the Akimichi matriarch called her clan to dinner.

The Uchiha compound was as silent as always but the lights were on now and it was no longer a dark place of bad memories.

A loud crashing sound would have normally sent her running to the source of the disturbance, but since the crashing was coming from the Lee compound where the Tai-Jutsu specialist and Konoha’s weapon’s mistress were raising their progeny she wasn't too worried. Both brother and sister had had more then their share of hospital visits just like their parents.

Finally though she stood outside the door to her home, it was a large estate with a dojo and a hot spring within. She sighed blissfully as she passed her rose garden, and the Cherry blossom trees that bore her namesake. He’d planted the bushes and the trees himself all for her.

She smiled and opened the door only to nearly be knocked over by two smiling children who greeted her with bright clear laughs as they jumped up into her arms and hugged her for all they were worth. She laughed with them and returned the hug squeezing them too her as if they were her life which in fact they were.

They hugged that way for a couple of moments because in their house that was the rule, love and affection above all else. She affectionately tousled the neat blond hair of her son while simultaneously trying to straighten the wild orange hair of her daughter causing both kids to groan out a whining “Moooooom!!” which caused her to smirk playfully.

“Go get ready for dinner you two. Knowing your father it’ll be ready soon.” She laughed as they hopped upright and ran off for the bathroom. She could smell his cooking on the stove. He always had supper ready for her in spite of his busy schedule as Hokage. She laughed as her conversation with Karin came back to her. Kage-Bushin really did come in handy with paperwork she laughed to herself.

She found him in the nursery he was sitting in the comfy rocking chair they’d received from Ino as a gift so they could sit with the baby and holding their youngest son in his arms. The adorable picture brought a tear of joy to her eye as he rocked back and forth humming a small melody she recognized as the song “Sakura Blossoms” that he had written, and played on the piano for her. First a love song for her, and now a lullaby for her children; she couldn’t love him any more at this moment if she tried.

The small baby boy with his tousled pink hair and wide sapphire eyes sensed her presence, and reached for her with a small pudgy hand and said in a bright soft voice “Mama!!”

A pair of beautiful blue eyes looked up at her and said with that loving smile he reserved only for her “Sakura-Chan, Welcome home.”

She smiled back beautifully as he pulled her into his warm embrace and kissed her long and lovingly while the baby kooed. She held him for a long time before resting her forehead against his and softly said to him.

“Yes. I’m home”

                                                  The End
©2008-2009 ~catsi563
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Author's Comments

In your eyes Chapter 12: Epilogue

Sakura's vision. A look at the future.


In your arms (the prequel) [link]

In your eyes Chapter 1: vacation [link]
In your eyes Chapter 2: bubble bath [link]
In your eyes Chapter 3: Dance the night away [link]
In your eyes Chapter 4: Feel the thunder; chase the lighting from the sky
[link]
In your eyes Chapter 5: After the Storm [link]
In your eyes Chapter 6: The movement of shadows [link]
In your eyes Chapter 7: Points of view [link]
In your eyes Chapter 8: Earth & storm Fire & ice [link]
In your eyes Chapter 9: Formation Ino-Shika-Cho [link]
In your eyes Chapter 10: On the wings of love [link]
In your eyes Chapter 11: Fly away home [link]
In your eyes Chapter 12: Epilogue [link]


Naruto and all publicly recognized characters belong to Kishimoto sensei.

Story owned by me

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:iconoxvane:
*Applause*

Beautiful story as a whole, sentences were clear, scenes easy to picture, and every feeling felt by each caracter is very well described, I enjoyed reading it alot.

I also particuarly liked the Epilogue, although classy, and somewhat non-original, it was still highly impressive in both context and choice of words.

And, to put it simply, the strenght of the bond between Naruto and Sakura, the way you,ve explained and showed it, it was pretty interesting. There is very little growth in they're love, at least to me the isn't, since it feels like it as always been there, but was now a bit easier to notice.

If I can allow myself a quick suggestion, do not stop with this epilogue, you've left yourself open with a possible chance to write a sequel, which could include the other couples you've mentioned in the Epilogue. Or even write a story on how they event reached that point in their lives.

-Oxvane
:iconmrfipp:
First time using this face---> ^-^ Such a cute way to end things.

And it's also good to see that Sakura's little dream from before come true.

Hey, since Karin in now a Konoha shinobi, what about Suigesto and Juggo?

I look foward to any and all work you may do in the future.

Please be well

Mrfipp

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:iconcatsi563:
=^_^= thanks glad you enjoyed

I definatley planned on writing the ending as Sakuras vision from the beginning.

As to Suigetsu hes freelance for my stories purpose, and Juugo is under Konohas care. he lives with Sasuke and works with the Inuzuka

Their well be more in the future as soon as I can write it.

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:iconcatsi563:
=^_^= thank you so much

I definatley agree I believe Naruto and Sakura have loved each other a long time but have needed time to come to terms with their hearts.

The story itself is basically done though if something comes up where I have an idea I may expand the story or mroe likely write a sequel.

Ive also had a request to write a side story about Naruto and Sakura's marriage which I may do as well.

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:iconhighspeed0516:
Meh - you don't need a sequel. This wraps everything up perfectly, everyone's happy and everyone found someone. There's always next generation type stories, but I think sometimes just little side stories or focus on other characters works best.

You forgot Shikamru and Temari in the list of pairings lol. I'm just kidding, you fit so many in it was amazing it didn't come off as trying too hard.

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=^_^= yeah I was really trying in the last chapter to cover the pairings I hadnt hit yet. I already covered shikatema earlier and went with the ones I like and have a good feeling about.

Their amy eb some side stories here and their to fill in the world a bit but theyll come later.

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:iconnaruto1217:
What a great ending.

It *sniff* it brings a tear to my eye.:love:

Very nicely done.

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:iconcatsi563:
=^_^= Aww thanks and thanks for sticking through to the end Its much appreciated

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:iconheavenscloud18:
cool thats a good ending to a good story

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:iconcatsi563:
=^_^= thanks glad you enjoyed

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